My pancakes are super fun

1. he looks like a pretty gnarly piece of HUNGRY BREAKFAST FOOD and i think that's how it's supposed to turn out
2. well, as i said in that last post he looks pretty successfully freaky
3. well the plate kinda moved a little that's about the only thing wrong
4. i don't think there's really anything to change
5. making the mouth look like a part of it was probably the worst
6. i actually already knew most of this stuff already so i didn't really learn anything new